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Literature
Tear Down the Sun
[Verse 1]
Nicest eyes to my sight, through my armour it slices
From the corner of the right, they send chills up my arm to my spine
Then from the left, I let your hand fill mine
The gaze anhialates any shrill thought arresting my mind
You graze your index on my temple while your iris sizes me up like a stencil, you're like Midas
With a touch so gentle, hope you know I can't handle another crisis
You're so close to me, I can see the lense that lies on your iris
I've found the brightest radiant blue, drivin me mental, staring down at mine when you ride
Even though you say you've got butterflies, I remain terrified
It's just lucky for us that we make love amazing enough to silence me when
You say you've got a date with another guy
I wonder why you won't just say to this guy to go take a hike
Whenever you spoke?
You won't, keepin' me on my toes, so it's a sign that I won't
Let you behind this wall, I'll choke if you invade it
Meanwhile you say you've fallen for me, but I'm too yello
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Literature
She's His
[Verse 1]
Butterflies in my stomach
Puts butterflies in my head
Butterflies puts butter beneath my feet
I mistep trying to get her threadless
I'm brought to my knees, trying to get her on her knees
I slip, hit my head and now it's a mess
From scheming to leave these sheets in a mess
I wake up in a sweat, dreaming about making her sweat
Although her heads on my Adams apple checking my breath
It's still a battle for her to straddle me
Because actually whenever we're together
Her daddy never has to lose sleep
No need for him to count sheep,
Just count on me to fetch a net instead
Because my butterflies will never get her int'a bed
It's another guys butterfly knives which triggers her infrared
Got no street cred
No man ever got laid being the good egg
So it's desperate promises of sex before I've left I guess
Fibs so phony in this big city I'm left so lonely
So, I can no longer keep her number in my phone, see?
I can never be in her life if it's with Sanjeep
Because she loves Jeff B
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Literature
Bliss Track
[Verse 1]
My promise to you right now
is to make your heart pound
I promise to make your blood course so tight that it'll be forced to stop
I'll force so many rhymes into one line, your eyes will throb
I'll make you grab for so much air that your lungs will pop
like a shopping mall balloon; Five years and it's all still too soon
to excuse you of accusing me of abuse
It's not that I'm not over you
It's just that when I drop your name, I get amused
Especially since you could've prevented this with the truth
And since you were the very cooze that showed me just how much words can bruise
Never again will you leave me without those words to say
Because once I get started grilling you
That dude you sent to my work will have no choice but to fucking drag me away!
This is the Bliss Track!
[Chorus]
And like lighting an unlit match
I could write a diss track
Even if it meant a risk on my life
Just to piss you off
Like a lit match I will mister a Bliss Track
As easy as it is to scat
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Literature
This Winter
[Verse 1]
I want a picture-perfect permanent fixture to fix amid my heater
I need a woman to make my hot chocolate just that little bit sweeter
I'll be sipping it with her and by the end of winter, we would've consumed a few litres
I want that one reason to flick a switch and top my electricity meter
I want to show my baby that unlike outside, my heart is not a freezer
From the coldness of night, I'll be the bleeder
The fleecy-feature-presenting-cuddle on a two-seater
Someone I can treat like royalty
Baby, jump out from my computer screen
I want to be one with the radiating heat of a beautiful creature
[Chorus]
On my neck - I want the warmth of your breath
On my shoulders - I want your fingers to stretch
So tight that it leaves twin hand-prints on my skin
A type of stigma that will outlive the chill this winter
With a heat that can only be applied by the love in a finger
I will be home alone, writing down whatever I think will
Get you here in my arms this winter
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Literature
Well Worded Woo Tales
[Verse 1]
You sell those facts that in actual fact are fiction
Only to cover your lacking fixed convictions
I insisted on silence but you've failed to listen
To anyone who knows the person under that skin
You've diminished anything left of us, you were my kin
But you were full of it, for you I would've taken a bullet
But for your addiction, the flick was what I was given
You see, No matter how hard I tried to
What you've done cannot be forgiven
And with that, what we had died too
And how could I not question the basis in which you've been thinkin'
You know that those fictitious words of wisdom, they've cut me like an incision
Can't judge me - you've never felt this sting
I know who you truly are every time I begin reminiscing
It's more profound than anyone of your silly flings.
[Chorus]
But it won't beat those
Well Worded Woo Tales
You've never known who you are
But I've known deep inside
The male behind those
Well Worded Woo Tales
The verbs and that smile, they may not f
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Literature
You Got Me
[Chorus1]
So, now that you're in the mix
Now, that you've got me fixed
So strongly on your face that
I want you,
To tell me my place
I haven't gotten you
But you've got me
Because if you were to say that I liked you
Then You Got Me because
You've caught me, getting caught just like I've tried to.
[Verse 1]
This night is almost over but I won't let it end
I'd be anything if it's more than just your friend
You got me, worried that you'll forget me
You got me, leaving without kissing you
You got me, wishing that you didn't let me
I'll be sincere because I've seen the sincerity in you
Fun doesn't seem to exist when I'm not around you
That's why,
I've rushed to your work when I've felt down
Because your beauty is the cure to my bad moods
You got me, wanting to know who I am to you
You got me, wishing to be unjustly seduced
You got me, waiting here wanting you to get me.
[Chorus2]
So, now that you're in the mix
Now that you've got me fixed
So strongly on your face that
I
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Literature
Hurt Me, Hurt You
[Chorus]
I am going to take your legs off and make you crawl
You were last night's dream and you should see what I saw
I made incisions for every shity decision of yours
In fact I wasn't even done and you were already red raw
But you see the only thing between you and a knife is the law
You hurt my feelings; I should prevent you from healing
I should've hurt you for every word you used to hurt me
And for that, I want you to know what I'd do if there were no police [echo-fade out] …ice…ice..ice.
[Verse 1]
Watch your back because that's where I'll be
You did the wrong but I'm paying the penalty
You're getting away with everything when you should be bleeding
This isn't about what I want; it's about what I need
Killing you will be the pill that will help me sleep
So, if I was bedded out of sympathy
Then what are these letters about?
Be scared because I'm not so silent now
If you thought that I was violent back then
Then you should see me now.
[Chorus]
[Verse 2]
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[Verse 1]
Nicest eyes to my sight, through my armour it slices
From the corner of the right, they send chills up my arm to my spine
Then from the left, I let your hand fill mine
The gaze anhialates any shrill thought arresting my mind
You graze your index on my temple while your iris sizes me up like a stencil, you're like Midas
With a touch so gentle, hope you know I can't handle another crisis
You're so close to me, I can see the lense that lies on your iris
I've found the brightest radiant blue, drivin me mental, staring down at mine when you ride
Even though you say you've got butterflies, I remain terrified
It's just lucky for us that we make love amazing enough to silence me when
You say you've got a date with another guy
I wonder why you won't just say to this guy to go take a hike
Whenever you spoke?
You won't, keepin' me on my toes, so it's a sign that I won't
Let you behind this wall, I'll choke if you invade it
Meanwhile you say you've fallen for me, but I'm too yellow to say it
You ask if I've been all in with other babes
And I make like I've got another nine at the same time, but you're still my favourite
Now you're on my mind everyday and I think you feel the same
It's your eyes motivatin' me to foresake skatin' on this thin ice
The way I've been behavin' right up 'til Copenhagen
I realise was so unkind, so it's time
To break from these player games
Never regret though, lies kept yo' / from taking flight
Makes no sense though, when I have a paper ticket for a plane
But it's not set in stone, I could take it and rip it and make you mine
I'd stay in this city for you, even if it's a city I hate
With you in it, it's paradise, that's why
I don't want you to eye my surname, but I ain't got eyes for any other damer
You're the fucking apple of my eye, that's why
This chapter of my life and your face, they're becoming one and the same
And that's just when the sun rises and all it takes
Is a few winks and the bat of an eye
And without a matter of time, you say that we're only mates
Who knew that happiness could pivot inside like a knife?
It'll take a battle cry and a fist to the face to get me back to that place
Either that, or I just pray eight times to this crystal glass of whisky ice.

[Chorus]
It's me you see, calling in the moonlight
You fall for me, but the dark has you terrified
Squeeze my hand 'till it leaves a mark
Squeeze until I realise it's all a dream
Will it be mine when the sun rises and widens my eyes
It won't, so I'll climb up and tear down the sun.
If it's a fright in your back
When it's the sight that you lack
If you won't ride that bike passed late
And I'm not your guy once I awake
Then like a gun, I'll be in the sky
Tearing down the fucking sun
I'll tear down the sun.

[Verse 2]
Several hits of this weed
Never so quickly have I fallen so deeply back to sleep
Never so quickly have I fallen so deeply for a dream
I miss you like crazy, three nights away felt like weeks
I scrub my knees weak like I have O.C.D.
Dorm room cleaner than a preacher's sheets
Thoughts of us meeting makes me giddy, my heart pump and skip a beat
I serindipitously bump into you on the street
Go to kiss your lips, shit, you hardly give me a cheek
You hardly greet me, like a stranger you treat me
Not excited, too busy leaving me
On your bike, to see a friend, to tell a lie
Actually to see another guy
Shit, I'm not asleep, I'm just fricking high
My hand on your thigh riddling me with fear and anxiety
Time to leave your bed in the middle of the night
This is real life and, shit, it seems like my/ nightmares are finally here
Just like where I want you, but you are too tied up at Vilhelm Kiers
Now around my home I can hear some fella sneak
Fuck it, never have ma' feelins' felt this cheap
You live right next to me, I can still hear your door squeak
Whenever I'm alone, I can see your eyes meet whenever I try to close mine to sleep
Like amnesia, it took you three minutes to forget when we hit it off at the kitchen sink
Now you keep arguing with me like we were a casual black and white thing
Whenever he's around, I'm wound so tight it stings
Whenever hes around I can feel my heart sink
Into my tum, tum
On the way down, it thumps as if it's a fucking kick drum
We say we want a friendship, but we couldn't be more fucking dumb
Unless we want the next two months to be like sucking the front of a gun
If peddling to his bed makes you fret when the daylight is dead, I'll tear down the sun
and suck a bottle of Ambien pills till the bottom if it meant just one more modicum of fun.
...
Just one more kiss
I swallow six and my head gets/ so sick
I toss and twist/ knots in my stomach
The clock ticks/ my blood thick
I watch every digit just countdown every minute
Closer to sunset, closer to the darkness we dread
Another night, another empty bed that I sleep to the right of it
because you slept on the left before you left
I really thought you felt the same, but you said you had a "reality check"
If for a minute I could forget the things like that youve said
If you quit treating me like its somethin' I should get
I wouldn't forget how to be at my best, I'd get a little rest
Your decision I'd respect, but I'll never accept that all I am is a finished cigarette
Sixty thousand listening to Dizzy Miss Lizzy and I still see your fingers in your boyfriends
So, I won't stop texting until I become a damn pest
I call and call until your fucking brother sends me a friend request
I mess you around until we destroy the essence of what I have dreamt
I ruin the best parts of myself, no more is there the same heart in this chest
So, I better endeavour to sevor whatever had us both so obsessed
Girl, we built a hell for our ourselves, it just happens to be at our address.

[Chorus x2]

[Verse 3]

Now I'm wide awake and aside from the fact that you're afraid of the dark
I still haven't a clue who you truly are
I'm starting to think that you're actually from Jupiter
You used Budapest against me and that's the rudest part
We'd just met, but I admit it was a stupid start
Tried to glue it back together, alluded to make it exclusive
But like shooting the breeze, it was absolutely useless because
This is just when I blew your mind, you blew him, blew me straight through your heart and out your arse
And that's the judice part
It's got me shedding tears I haven't shed in a year, in my room, noodle aisle of a supermarket
I'm a lunatic so long as we belong to the same kommune
It's your confusion which's left another boot mark on a confused heart
It's our conclusion which has me infatuated with the thought of you nude with your new dude
While you two root, in virtually the next room
Pretty crude, recalling you in my ear, oooh
Well I hope you recall me in your room when I paint it in Joop
I call disrespect, you say it ain't true, I'm just rude
Now there's nothing you can do to fix a feud
With a boy with more mood swings than a Toys"R"Us
With whom you lured and toyed with his trust
You can't be disgusted with me, I already have the task covered
Never say I haven't been punished enough/ when every snooze is pharmaceutical
Now I'm going down shooting since I've got nothing left to lose
Before you threw me away like you got new ones, get into my shoes
In the common room, you look so damn beautiful
I'd do anything to nail you, it's shredding me up like a cuticle
You mean so much to me, you even have a letter at my funeral
But you act like all I was to you was a back up fuck boy, it's ludicrous
How you went from being a beautiful hallucination to an incubus
Now the more jealous I get, the sexier you get, so I should
Stop answering your texts, block that Facebook
Stop the banter, the sex, all was so damn good
But like a specter, every time you open your lips, it just gets shittier
So friends said I better get rid of ya', questioning how could
This itty bitty facsimile of every chick in this city livin' with ya' be given ya' this much anxiety?
Tricking ya mind, diddling dicky while try'na convince you Ryan that you're a one of kind guy, see?
One minute you're Mister Fantastic, now she stiffin' ya' like you're Mitty
Bitch's riddled with chlamydia, acting all innocent like a calico kitty
Of course you were too busy switchin positions, little did you see there was another dude in your neighbourhood
Get back to reality, back to being the loser we know, a lone wolf.

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